Before / after
Same visitors. Better page.
Real product pages, rebuilt to sell harder on a phone. I pick a page, find what is costing it sales, and rebuild the first screen around the buying decision. None of these brands hired me. This is how I would fix yours.
- Rebuilds
- 4
- Built for
- Mobile first, 390px
- Brand assets
- Real logos and real product photos
- Newest
- Fly By Jing
01 · Product page
Fly By Jing
A best seller with 2,459 reviews, hidden behind a full-screen discount quiz and a pack picker you had to scroll to find.
Fly By Jing is not a client. I rebuilt this uninvited.
01 · First screen
A popup quiz on load
The jar, the headline and the rating
02 · Packs
Below the fold
Four packs with the price per jar
03 · The button
About 1,350px down
Add 2 jars to cart, $30, on the first screen
04 · Reassurance
Away from the button
Dispatch time and free shipping over $75 right under it
02 · Product page
Minimalist
The whole first screen was a product photo. Price and Add to Cart sat about 1,600px further down.
Minimalist is not a client. I rebuilt this uninvited.
01 · What it does
Not on the first screen
Control oil. Refine pores. Even out tone.
02 · Price
About 1,600px down
Next to the name, with the MRP and 10% off
03 · Size
Further down again
Four size pills, 30ml already picked
04 · Trust
A chat bubble covering the page
48-hour dispatch, cash on delivery, 7-day replacement
03 · Product page
Kyte Baby
29,067 reviews and a strong safety story, let down by an Add to Cart button that looked switched off.
Kyte Baby is not a client. I rebuilt this uninvited.
01 · The button
Flat grey, looked disabled
Brand colour, with the price on it
02 · Headline
Just the product name
A real headline under the rating
03 · Trust
Below the TOG slider
Shipping, returns and Afterpay right under the button
04 · Safety
Further down the page
AAP and OEKO-TEX points near the top
04 · Product page
Caraway
A $125 pan shown as a flat cutout, with the reason to buy it nowhere near the price.
Caraway is not a client. I rebuilt this uninvited.
01 · Headline
Fry Pan
No PFAS. No sticking. Nothing to worry about.
02 · Photo
A plain cutout on white
The pan in use, with food in it
03 · Proof
The word "Reviews"
4.7 stars from 18,886 reviews, by the price
04 · Next step
Six size and set options first
One Add to Cart button with the price on it
Want this done to your page?
Send the link. On a 30-minute call I will show you what is costing the page sales and what the rebuild would change first.